[IPP] IPP Everywhere Review Draft

[Petrie, Glen]

Michael,

 

Line 232:  I don't believe that a Printer creates or manages a
"Document".  What seems to be described here is Job-Ticket and for an
IPP's scenario; indeed the "printer" creates and manages a Job-Ticket
that contains the description, processing and status information.

 

Line 274:  I still find the word "control" strange in this sentence.
Would "manage" be a better word.

 

Line 406 and 411 and 575:  Is the word "enumeration" supposed to be the
word "Enumeration" defined in the definition section?

 

Line 587 and 602 (and may be others): Service here, I believe, does not
correspond to the "Service" in the definition section; thus, should it
be "service"

 

Line 527: Since the words "with generic drivers" was not deleted; I
content there needs to be a wording change.   It is not a "generic
driver".  As it will always be, there is a device specific driver in the
print-stream somewhere; mostly likely within a printer or virtual
printer controller.   Anyway, I believe the term "driver" should be
replaced with something else.

 

Line 656: Suggest:   "IPP Everywhere aware Clients"

 

Line 695 and the new section 4.2.3.3: Is the word "service" supposed to
be "Service"

 

Line 714 to Line 721: I would like to suggest a table for like...

 

                        Table X List of TXT Key/Value Pairs from Most
Important to Least Important

 

For Access Info to Printer

For identify the Printer

For Capabilities and/or Printer Selection Criteria 

For Legacy Printer Selection

Most

Important

 

 

 

--- To ---

 

 

 

Least

Important

"rp"

"UUID"

"Color"

"Product"

"txtvers"

"DUUID"

"Duplex"

"usb_MFG"

"priority"

"ty"

"Copies"

"usb_MDL"

"qtotal"

 

"Collate"

"usb_CMD"

"note"

 

"PaperMax"

"pdl"

"air"

 

"PaperCustom"

 

"TLS"

 

"Bind"

 

"adminurl"

 

"Punch"

 

 

 

"Sort"

 

 

 

"Staple"

 

 

Figure 1:  Elsewhere (I did not check everywhere) you changed "IPP
Everywhere Service" to "IPPEverywhere Service" but not in the Figure.

 

Line 1369 and 1384:  why was the phrase "so-called" inserted?

 

Line 1439, 1446, 1456, 1462: The section reference values are missing.

 

Glen

 

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From: ipp-bounces at pwg.org [mailto:ipp-bounces at pwg.org] On Behalf Of
Michael Sweet
Sent: Thursday, September 06, 2012 6:54 PM
To: ipp at pwg.org
Subject: [IPP] IPP Everywhere Review Draft

 

All,

 

After sifting through 153 comments (!) from 12 respondees, I have
produced a new draft of IPP Everywhere for review at Monday's IPP WG
conference call:

 

            ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippeve10-20120906.docx

            ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippeve10-20120906.pdf

 
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippeve10-20120906-rev.pdf

            ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/lcrc-ippeve10.txt (summary
of comments with resolutions)

 

Enjoy!

 

__________________________________________________

Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair

 


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