Looks good. 1. Slide 4: change "final draft" to "final standard text" 2. Please also post a black and white .pdf (two-up) so people can print. 3. Slide 5, add / after ipp in the URL. 4. Slide 20, typo: implemented 5. Slide 22, add the web address 6. Slide 23, typo: Query Tom and Carl-Uno